Or are you
Just another product of my
Cable television mind
Fli-fli-flicking on and off
Out of sight but there you are
Are you??!
How am I supposed to love
Someone that's not even there?
The concept of you is beautiful
So beautiful
Like a paint can full of fluorescent stars
Thrown carelessly against
A wall as black as velvet night
Like a voice as warm as honey
Like a darkness as light as
Snow is white
But where are you?
You exorcised my demons
You helped me dream
Of glittering skylines
Of burnt sienna sunrises
You painted the world green and blue
But demons and colours
and dreams
Are just figments of our imagination
Imaginary
Like you.

I've written something SO similar to this, like three years back.
ReplyDeleteUncannily similar, i tell you.
but nevertheless, I love the similes you used. Very nice.
The imagery is awesome. :)
This is brilliant :). I love the concept, it's amazing!
ReplyDelete"The concept of you is beautiful
So beautiful
Like a paint can full of fluorescent stars
Thrown carelessly against
A wall as black as velvet night"
My favourite bit of imagery you've used.
Awesome :)
Thank you my babies <3
ReplyDeleteIt's a beautiful poem, but an idea cannot be imaginary :) So er, think of it as an idea rather than something tangible. An experience that you'll remember, dwell upon, and then just store in the recesses of your mind.
ReplyDeleteLove, Your favourite irrational number.
So beautiful
ReplyDeleteLike a paint can full of fluorescent stars
Thrown carelessly against
A wall as black as velvet night
^ I LOVE that!
is it weird that I understand every word you wrote there? memories can be a bitch
Anonymous: I know who you are and I love you :)
ReplyDeleteSS: Thank you <3 I know right :(